When Liesel placed the book back into position
she offered it to the girl Liesel
the was an uncomfortable silence
Rudy broke the silence
in the distance there was gun-fire
Samensch!!! mama abused her last night
she hasnt got a hope
she sucked in a big gulp of air
"SAMENSCH!" she shouted
You sakeral she accused him when she collapsed onto the river bank
come one Liesel.
This is a found poem based on loneliness and despair. This explains all the loss and emotional discard that Liesel and the people he holds dear to her have gone through. Not necessarily in the exact context of this poem but in generality.
I liked your poem a lot Blake I liked how you used words that had meaning. But it looks like your for got to put citations into your work. Overall good poem
ReplyDeleteYeah i agree with Tyler. Good poem. I also really liked the pictures. They add a lot.
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